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here are a few from yesterday ...... let me know how everything is looking.

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The first one isn't great. She's looking away and her fingers are purple (was it that cold?)
#2 is better. The tones and exposure a good but she still looks either cold or uncomfortable.
In #3, she is looking more comfortable and #4 looks to be the best of the bunch.
#5 looks a little too contrasty to me. #6 is better.

Overall, I like the color ones better. She has great hair color and the warm tones (hair, clothes, background) really go well together.
 
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thanks for the reply mike...
yes it was chilly out in the morning when we started
 

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thanks for the reply mike...
yes it was chilly out in the morning when we started

i think that looks frostbite purple... i would just do some quick selective coloring on her hands and pull that out..

I agree with #4 being the best of the bunch..
Great job overall in my opinion, keep it up
 

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I would agree that #4 is the best, however, there is a stick that looks like it is coming out of her bottom. Other than that I say keep up the good work.
 
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thanks everyone.
this was my first portrait session and I just wanted to know if I was on the right track.

the one thing I know I need work on is getting a variety of poses.
 
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Ok I here is my attempt at the purple skin in #1.
let me know what you think .....better or worse ?

ORIGINAL
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NEW EDIT
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mUCH BETTER!@
 

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I think your crop look a little wierd, like missing figures and toes. I like the crop in 1, and 6, the rest of the crop is a bit distracting for me. Just my 2 cent.
 

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#4 is excellent (agree with the stick comment, though). #3 is good on your part...wish she looked more at ease, but her hair/pose/coloring looks wonderful. Nice work overall.
 

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3 is great. Nice shots.
 

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