"Shattered Lives..."

[enezdez]

D750
f/13
ISO 140
1/60 Sec.
24 - 70 mm - f/2.8G
50 mm

(Processed In Both LR & Silver Efex Pro 2.)

It's suppose to be abstract art and the broken branches represent lost/shattered lives...you even see their emblematic heart...

Thanks For Looking Any Comments/Criticism Will Be Appreciated. (Tell Me If It Works Or Not)

Enezdez

 

[bulldurham]

If you have to direct me, it is likely a sure bet I wouldn't have seen it on my own..and I don't. This image gets lost it itself: too much busy not doing anything to direct the eye to a main focal point.

 

[enezdez]

If you have to direct me, it is likely a sure bet I wouldn't have seen it on my own..and I don't. This image gets lost it itself: too much busy not doing anything to direct the eye to a main focal point.

Thanks For Your Input!

 

[Gary A.]

On my monitor I would like it darker. If you're going for the abstract and the heart, maybe a crop just of the reflection portion (or slightly above the water line). Or maybe not as you would lose the upside down heart. I do like the mottled water much more than the highly detailed-to-distraction above the waterline leaves.