slightly nswf

binga63 · May 12, 2015

nice ...love the mask

vintagesnaps · May 12, 2015

She looks good, just seems maybe a little cropped off to the right (I think it's seeing that little slightly darker corner that's the edge of her right leg). It might have been worth smoothing the background a little, the light maybe accentuated folds in the fabric where it was pulled/stretched. (Nitpicky I suppose because there's nothing major to critique!)

bribrius · May 12, 2015

passed out drunk after a masquerade party? i dunno. Just not getting much of a vibe here on this one..

Fred Berg · May 12, 2015

With this type of look it makes me wonder if bland is the new black. Not a fan of this type of exposure/processing personally. Regarding Sharon's comment about smoothing out the fabric it looks like she's on a leather or vinyl sofa, which may not be that effective without a little context but could work in a wider setting.

The_Traveler · May 12, 2015

I think down to the red arrow, it's great; it starts to get a bit confusing after that.
And I think that it needs more definition and detail at blue arrow.
Perhaps a bit more luminance to the skin and a bit of glow.

Derrel · May 12, 2015

This whole lying down, face-up, seen from the other room type pose has never resonated with me. Ever. And I've seen it a lot. It's one of the most overused visual tropes, and I've seen it for literally decades on models as hot as Irena Shayak to Christie Turlington, etc.etc.. Just never works for me. Ever. It's not sexy. It's not even attractive. No offense intended, but I have no idea why people keep going back to this one. Not sure if you're looking for C&C or what, since there's absolutely no text posted with it. The plugged up black on the hair closest to the camera don't make much sense to me.

mmaria · May 13, 2015

binga63 said:
nice ...love the mask

you're too kind

vintagesnaps said:
She looks good, just seems maybe a little cropped off to the right (I think it's seeing that little slightly darker corner that's the edge of her right leg). It might have been worth smoothing the background a little, the light maybe accentuated folds in the fabric where it was pulled/stretched. (Nitpicky I suppose because there's nothing major to critique!)

thanks for your words Sharon

bribrius said:
passed out drunk after a masquerade party? i dunno. Just not getting much of a vibe here on this one..

what's wrong with the masquerade party!?

it's ok. thanks for commenting

mmaria · May 13, 2015

Fred Berg said:
With this type of look it makes me wonder if bland is the new black. Not a fan of this type of exposure/processing personally. Regarding Sharon's comment about smoothing out the fabric it looks like she's on a leather or vinyl sofa, which may not be that effective without a little context but could work in a wider setting.

you're right, it's leather sofa. I did get wider but that picture isn't even decent

Thank you for the comment.

The_Traveler said:
I think down to the red arrow, it's great; it starts to get a bit confusing after that.
And I think that it needs more definition and detail at blue arrow.
Perhaps a bit more luminance to the skin and a bit of glow.
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It needs more time in pp I guess

Derrel said:
This whole lying down, face-up, seen from the other room type pose has never resonated with me. Ever. And I've seen it a lot. It's one of the most overused visual tropes, and I've seen it for literally decades on models as hot as Irena Shayak to Christie Turlington, etc.etc.. Just never works for me. Ever. It's not sexy. It's not even attractive. No offense intended, but I have no idea why people keep going back to this one. Not sure if you're looking for C&C or what, since there's absolutely no text posted with it. The plugged up black on the hair closest to the camera don't make much sense to me.

oh Derrel

.... and you can critique everything I post