Slippery Summer Fun...

mpasq66 · Jul 13, 2010

Mostly "snapshot'ish" but fun. Mid-day, lots of sun, white tarp= exposure hell!

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If you see anything worth C&C, please do... other than the cut off limbs. (Hey, they were coming pretty quick!!!!!) :lol:

dak1b · Jul 13, 2010

only pic I like is the last one.

edouble · Jul 13, 2010

I think you did a great job exposing these pictures. What camera was used?

flyingember · Jul 13, 2010

as a set of photos it works super well

if you showed me just the first or second one I'd say you need to zoom in more.

misstwinklytoes · Jul 13, 2010

#1 looks like everyone's about to have fun, I agree about zooming in more. Mostly because I think the guy off to the right is a little creepy.

#2 Again, probably would have zoomed in or out so that little girl in the back didn't have half a head.

#3 I like this and the color and light are great IMO. If only her foot was on the mat and you could have gotten all the same color background. The strip of grass kind of brings my eye there, and there's nothing there but a foot.

I really like the last one, but it make me

cause I thought it was a slip and slide and the liquid there looks like... milk or something?

a.rodgers · Jul 13, 2010

1st one needs a crop, but its still a good pic. I like the last one the best, but i think 2 and 3 did a good job capturing emotion! It looks like a good time!

SecondShot · Jul 13, 2010

I really like the third one. It captures the moment really well. My recommendation would be to try a tighter vertical crop, to cut off most/all the grass to the right, and a little on the left, so that all you see is this great family race down the slip n' slide. Digging the little s-curve you have going on as well.

burnws6 · Jul 13, 2010

Misleading thread title. Lol

mpasq66 · Jul 13, 2010

misstwinklytoes said:
#1 looks like everyone's about to have fun, I agree about zooming in more. Mostly because I think the guy off to the right is a little creepy.

#2 Again, probably would have zoomed in or out so that little girl in the back didn't have half a head.

#3 I like this and the color and light are great IMO. If only her foot was on the mat and you could have gotten all the same color background. The strip of grass kind of brings my eye there, and there's nothing there but a foot.

I really like the last one, but it make me cause I thought it was a slip and slide and the liquid there looks like... milk or something?