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snacking on some yan yan

JbleezyJ

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Now I'm hungry! Good control of lighting. Interesting color scheme - pink conflicts with the earth tones. Focus point is good and DOF works well though having the focus drop off more to the left and upper left might have focused attention on the writing more. Upside down writing may not work here. Perspective and tight cropping I think works. We get just a hint of the lower bowl at the far bottom left corner - I would have cropped that out - want the subjects to have a continuum at the bottom with no suggestion of a closed space there. There is a little "peak" to the pink dead center that for some reason bothers me - doesn't follow the relatively flat, smooth, geometry of the subjects. Geometry of the white rims works well to bracket subjects while giving the eye a pathway through the image. Anyway, good shot.
 

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