Some new work (c&c please)

[lmchelaru]

Long time, no see, Photo Forum.
Here are some shots I've taken since last time I've been around.
I'd love some critiques. Be harsh. I can take it.

35mm silver gelatin print, sepia toned, poorly scanned.

digital

scanned 35mm negative. double exposure.

This is how I chose to have it displayed

I greatly appreciate any help. Thanks in advance.

 

[invisible]

Love the first one... It has some mysterious feel that keeps you looking. The lines created by the veil (?) do an awesome job of both framing the subject and guiding the eye through the frame. The only thing I'm not sure about is the sepia toning, but that's just me – I think it would look stunning in B&W.

 

[lmchelaru]

I have it both in sepia and in BW, and my photo teacher and I decided we prefer it in sepia. I've entered it in two competitions. It won 3rd place in the first one and 1st place in the second one. I might see how it does in BW.
Thanks!

 

[dry3210]

I like the first one. Has a ghostly but still bit of elegant look to it