Some recent shots. C&C Please? =]

[Napilopez]

Any comments and criticisms more than welcome! Always looking to improve. Just some random selections from the past week or so.

Lumix G3, shot RAW, processed through lightroom. 20mm(40mm) and 45mm(90mm) focal lengths(and equivalents) used. Only #3 and #8 were with the 20mm though. Thanks!

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[OrionsByte]

Only comments I really have are that I like the symmetry in #3 and #8, but #7 makes me dizzy and I really don't understand why you'd tilt this shot.

 

[Napilopez]

Haha I actually mainly tilted it to avoid a trashcan in the way. Framing was tough on that one because I was looking through a passageway. But then I actually kinda liked the tilt. Gives it a bit more motion, which I thought appropriate for a subway. Thanks for your comments!

 

[Napilopez]

Here's a closer crop for the turtle pic I think I like as much or better.



EDIT: Cropped and straightened the train shot in case people really prefer it that way.



EDIT2: Removed fence pic and placed in original post.

 

[EDL]

The subway shot would have been a kickin HDR!

I like it with the tilt, just as you had it.

3,6 and 7 are my favs. Overall, very nice.

 

[Napilopez]

Thanks! I didn't think of it at the time, but looking back on it it probably would've.

Appreciate the comments

 

[Napilopez]

Just bumping, I removed several of the original photos so that the number won't be so overwhelming. Hence the strange numbering.

As a self critique, I think I need to be a little more consistent with my processing. Sometimes I feel like I get it just right(4,7), others it feel a bit off or too much(3,5). 6 may be a little underexposed.

(P.S. the images link to my "Portfolio", but I'm not a photographer for career. Currently only a hobby. I just called it that to say they are selections. I'm new to this, but I'd like to know what I'm doing wrong and right regardless of my experience level.)

Thanks again!