I think it's kind of distracting where she is placed in the photo. She is looking into dead space/area, and it's too center weighted. Perhaps if she was simply placed on the left hand side, it would make the photo much more lovely.
Were you going for the orange skin look? I know it looks almost like evening light, sort of like sodium vapor bulbs. I think if it were mine, I would shift the color a little to a more yellow/less orange tint. Not much, just enough to loose the campfire look, unless that is what you were going for. JMO.