Does your studio look a lot different from this when it is NOT spring? Or how is this a "spring shoot", as opposed to others?
I can't critique this one. All I can say is: neither could I produce a photo of the kind AT ALL, nor could I do any better. Looks very studiolike and professional to me. What I'd get if I went to the local photographer and had him take pics, what with all the lights he has and all that.