I think this would be helped by brightening the area of the fireplace. It would help balance the scene a little bit more.
As it looks now, the dark space pulls my eye away more than it should.
Wow, definetely not what I expected from the title when I clicked in, but I really like it. It crisp and detailed, but not in a way that takes away from the subject. And the fact that she's got a floral pattern dress just kind of makes it melt right into the environment. I wonder what it would look like in Sepia tone.