Honesty? if ur looking for Criticism. well here it is. It does nothing for me. Ways of improvement/Experimenting. Mess with the Lighting. Possibly Color/B&W. Then Maybe even PS it. mess with Contrast/Brightness. But yeah.. Play with this shot if u Have PS and Repost. you maybe surprised on the feedback. Keep em coming. I should add. Even the Angle of the Shot. Maybe Pull a Macro lens deal, Fish Eye. I dunno But Experiment. Then post a Bunch of Options.