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Maybe crop more of the empty space out and make the frame more full of the berries. Nice color, DOF, and it seems sharp. And now I want to eat some......Mmmmm....

You know, that middle berry....the top of it, which is in focus just fine sort of blend into the back berry which is (appropriately) OOF and it makes it look like your center berry is OOF on the top, but it's not. Maybe if the back berry was a darker shade of red you wouldn't get that illusion. Anyway - totally picky, but just throwing it out there.
 

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Great, now I have to go to the store and hope they have some decent strawberries! :drool:

Overall I think it is a good shot, but I agree with Stella about maybe cropping the top a little to fill the screen with the red.

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Thanks for you all!
 

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I appreciate the use of triangle composition. I like the bokeh and exposure of an unspectacular subject. You did good.:thumbup:
 

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