Summer Berries

jkbogart · Dec 5, 2013

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Silver Gelatin Print
"Summer Berries" 2013
Julia Bogart
Juliabogart.smugmug.com

timor · Dec 6, 2013

Hi Julia, welcome to TPF.
Maybe can you say a few words about yourself. When did you start taking pictures, what do you like about photography etc. You know.
Your link apparently doesn't work as intended. I was not successful first time either. At the bottom of the main page you will find "Test Forum":
Test Forum
A place, to work out such a things.
You "Berries" are so so. I think for such a shot much better light is needed. Light like I can see on your pictures of bricks. Subject maybe not very interesting, but pictures are nice with dynamic colours and feel of third dimension. Cause the light was right. Tell me, the last picture is you ? This picture is different than the rest, it seems very soft, seems out of focus.
One more thing, you should loose the logo, it's way too big and obtrusive.

Braineack · Dec 6, 2013

timor said:
One more thing, you should loose the logo, it's way too big and obtrusive.

In all honesty you should ditch the entire site and just focus on learning the craft and taking better pictures before worrying about building a website to sell services/prints. Your 'Liddy Holidays' set shows potential, but it also highlights a lot of simple technical errors that someone selling photography services shouldn't be making.