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fatimaezzahra

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nicely exposed and pretty well framed
I don't know if this was an in-camera process or you edited afterwards, but it looks over-processed to me and there is a halo at every edge that reinfoces that conclusion.
dmc halo.webp

Although f4 gives you a great DOF in this little camera, it may not be the best quality.
The rocks in the foreground don't look as sharp as they should.

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I would have shot this in aperture preferred just because you want to get into the best optical range for that lens and I don't think f4 is it.
You have lots of room to raise your iso a bit and even lower the shutter speed.
If you choose to re-shoot this, I would try to find an angle where the sun isn't directly in the center and even, perhaps, when the sun was lower. A white ball of nothing doesn't add anything.
 
thanks for your notice i m glad to receive it, i still a beginner that's why your opinion help me a lot, i think i didn't choose the great parameter and i had over-processes it also i don't have a good camera " lumix fz8 :/ " i try to be good thanks :D
 

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