Sunset clouds

forgottenskies · Jul 27, 2005

What do you think?

Meysha · Jul 27, 2005

I love the rays of sunlight, but I feel like it's missing something. A bit of oompf, like a splash of colour or an object in there.

forgottenskies · Jul 27, 2005

yeah it was too high in the sky to get an object in there. Maybe a frame?

cbay · Jul 27, 2005

Ye i recon something is missing aswell, not quite sure what but also i recon the bottom right corner (the sun) is too bright in my opinion, others may think different though..

forgottenskies · Jul 28, 2005

Is this one any better?

forgottenskies · Jul 28, 2005

::BUMP::

Meysha · Jul 28, 2005

Ohhh yes I think that one's much better than the first. I think the original was just a bit much cloud vs sun. This one is nice and broken up and you get all those gorgeous colours around the clouds. But I still feel like it's missing something, you know to give it some relationship to the earth.... like a tree or some sort of perspective aiding object. I love the rays of sunlight!