Title this one! (Possible nsfw (bikini))

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  1. Trever1t

    Trever1t Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    One I just edited from a shoot with Sumalee last year. A little different? Color ok? What do you think?

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    by Bill Grayson, on Flickr


     
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    Peek-a-boo!

    I like it but I don't know really how I feel about her arms covering her face. I really like seeing the models face in a photo. I like the lighting and the colors.
     
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    Trever1t Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Yes it's a little bit different for me too.
     
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    Skin colors are OK but the background isn't working for some reason. Not sure what it is.
     
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    Another vote for "peek-a-boo".
     
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    Oi i had to go back and check the background
     
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    The model is gorgeous, the lighting is spectacular!

    It is a bit different with her arms covering her face. But I think it adds a little bit of mystery as a whole.

    Awesome! A+
     
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    Add me to the list of those who are not a fan of the arm placement. My problem with it is that there doesn't seem to be a reason for them to be where they are. She's not being shy, coy, silly, sexy, mysterious, ... . It's like she caught you out of the corner of her eye while stretching, and turned to see what was going on while continuing the stretch.
     
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    Trever1t Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Thank you for your critique(s)!
     
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    Great photo! But I am no good at titling photos. :)
     
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    I could say a lot of good things about this photo, but I'm thinking somehow my judgment is clouded
     
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