Under the bridge C&C please

[kravjitsu]

Thanks for looking

 

[Ls3D]

I like the bridge and sky,... not so much the 'art work'. Consider shooting a bit wider making the bridge and sky your only subjects, and if you can fire off a flash (off camera) from deep camera left I think the under belly of the bridge will really pop! A friend could simply trigger it for you in longer exposures. Experiment some more... :thumbup:

-Shea

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[kravjitsu]

I thought the graffiti is what made it interesting though? I dont have a off camera flash but was thinking about getting one. Maybe when i do ill give that a shot and try it with more sky and bridge. Thanks for the c&c

 

[Chad Truss]

A great capture, but the one problem I have with it is I can't decide which thing I want to look at more, the beautiful night sky or the graffitti. So these two things are competing for attention.