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JasonLambert

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Ok... Her first time and mine... How did we do?

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The Lighting is great! I like the pose.

erose you lush, drunk on TPF wow LOL :cheers:
 
... but it just seems "off" to me.

The way the fabric is situated seems weird... I can't really put my finger on *what* it is exactly...

I think it's the fact that the background is so uniformly black. It flattens space.
Her face is a little red compared to the creamy smoothness of her legs (sorry man, not hitting on your wife). If you could get that kind of look on her face, it would be a move in the right direction.
 
Emily, lol... We loved your take on this. I wish it was as you said "after the deed" but it was a set up shot. Thanks for your input.
 
Be careful of posting boudoir photos on the internet forums. I'm sure you have her permission and all is fine on your end but I've seen this get very sticky on here. Dont know how many lurkers are downloading it.
 
I think I would try this with a lighter background. I agree this is a beautiful woman. I think I would also not be looking straight down on her, maybe slightly lower.

I def think it's great for a first shot though!!
 
Too late..... It is my desktop now.

Be careful of posting boudoir photos on the internet forums. I'm sure you have her permission and all is fine on your end but I've seen this get very sticky on here. Dont know how many lurkers are downloading it.
 
I think I would also not be looking straight down on her, maybe slightly lower.

I def think it's great for a first shot though!!

Agreed, I am actually wondering how you got that angle!!! She does look like she is floating in a black void. Compliments to you both.
 
Too late..... It is my desktop now.

Be careful of posting boudoir photos on the internet forums. I'm sure you have her permission and all is fine on your end but I've seen this get very sticky on here. Dont know how many lurkers are downloading it.

Hahaha!!! We understand the dangers. No worries here... She was a porn star in her former life! (JUST KIDDING!)

Thanks for all of the kind words... I will make sure to do better the next time. I have a few ideas!
 

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