victoria.

[kfirg]

hi.

some pics from my last set.

 

[timor]

Hi. Just one question; don't you think, that the plan you used id too big ? She is hardly visible among this trees. The portrait is IMO to much a driving license shot, too en face and not very happy. She is drilling with hes eyes the viewer.

 

[kfirg]

mabye you are right.. thanks

 

[DanielLewis76]

Really like the colours etc in no1 but there is to much tree and background. Her Eyebrows just scare me in no2.

I wanted to see what no1 looked like a it tighter so did a quick crop...

 

[The_Traveler]

In #1 I think there is too much bright stuff in the background and on the tree she is leaning against.
Her face looks to me like she is facing into a bright flash (note how bright her hands are)
I would fix all those things (and move the big tree)

 

[timor]

This two crops are better I think. Now is she, not the forest.