Hi. #1 is very good, I like it, just one question; is it my display or the conversion to bw in the sky was not complete ? I see some blue there. #2 is a weak one. Doesn't have much of the drama of the first one, this yellow might be natural, but looks like enhanced by filter or in PP. There is a problem with contrast, horizon line is not defined and as a result the boats in far plan seem to hang in the air.
Shot was executed in sharp angle to the sun and your automatic exposure system got fooled and under exposed the shot; instead of sparks on the water there are just featureless bright blotches. This way you lost a lot of the mood of the picture. That's my opinion, only. Cheers.