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RobN185

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I'm not really sure what to say about this. I guess if you were one of these people it would be interesting. As side note, your highlights a blown, but I don't think it really matters in this shot.
 
Agreed, it's not really clear what your subject is.
 
I think the focus is on the crowd, but it's unfortunate that the person who has the most frontal and nearer exposure to the camera has her face partially blocked by her friend's coat hood. I'd also try to crop out as much as possible the sun blotch on the floor.
 
They could be waiting for Godot for alI can tell from their placement..I think the shot was there, but I also think you missed it...and so that story goes in all our photographic lives.
 
If anyone needs a story, just make up your own. :wink:

I really like the tonal range in the image.

The image could be used as an example of rule of thirds use.
The group of 4 is in the left 1/3 of the image.
The top 1/3 of the image is defined by the horizontal detail on the walls below the ceiling.
The people sitting at the tables and the grated dividers are in the middle 1/3 of the image frame.
 
I like it too, I really like the detail in the groups clothes. It's a titch over-exposed, and I'd be interested to see what other crops you could make of it. But the light on the people is fantastic, especially love the denim of the guy/gal with the bag slung over the shoulder.
 
Seems like I used a poor title for this post - Maybe I should have said "While I was waiting for Lunch"....or not.
My interest was the groups of people, their positions and individuality.
I know the floor is well blown, but in this case it didn't seem to grab my eye and distract me (but of course everyone is different).
Thanks for looking and commenting - I find comments and the way they are expressed are always interesting :) ("waiting for Godot" - Brilliant!!)

Here was another shot from the location...

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Wow..my first moment of brilliance for the New Year...:mrgreen:
 

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