Warehouse

[unpopular]

Thoughts?

 

[Steve01]

It's very flat with no real subject.
If you have a wider landscape version of the image and you get some contrast in the sky it may work better.

 

[heroes19]

The image composition is not strong enough...try again you will get better.

 

[Steve01]

OK, a slight crop change which doesn't help much but an example of what I mean about bringing some dynamic range to the image.

 

[unpopular]

Thanks all for your input so far. I think I do need to work on the hilights a bit. As for the composition, I'm really ok with it considering the project it's a part of.I really appreciate your thoughtful replies. Thank you.

 

[BlackSheep]

I'd like to see it if you do work on the highlights a bit, it's an interesting building. What is the project, if you don't mind me asking?

For what it's worth, I find the left wall (with the door) really eye catching, but IMO that big black window at the edge of the right side of the frame distracts the eye from it.

 

[unpopular]

Context and Relationship - a set on Flickr

The project deals with the relationship between forms and the context which these forms are in, but not as much the context of the scene as a whole - rather a kind of subset of circumstances unique to these forms and these forms alone. I am not really interested in creating harmonious images with static and clear subjects, but rather images that emphasize these concepts.

What I am finding is that when you emphasize relationships like this, you build up tension. I find it interesting that forms rather than relationships seem to be what we seek in images to make sense of them.

 

[tevo]

Thanks all for your input so far. I think I do need to work on the hilights a bit. As for the composition, I'm really ok with it considering the project it's a part of.I really appreciate your thoughtful replies. Thank you.

I love you and your context driven pictures (; I can definitely see how this would contribute to a collection. Good job.

 

[unpopular]

Thanks. Sometimes I wonder if I'm out in the weeds.

 

[dots]

I think i like it. I think i like it better using a tripod to get pinpoint crisp detail. It's handheldness lets it down - limits it to look too casual a shot.

Thoughts?

 

[dots]

3:2 portrait isn't the look IMO. 5:4 would at least give it a medium-format-esque, studied look (with a tripod).

 

[unpopular]

Just for those who commented, thank you, here is the finished version until I decide if it's worth reshooting or not. Sorry, the original is gone.

I did some dodging and a little bit of burning along the roof, and I desaturated the hilights, which had that nasty cyan tint.

 

[tevo]

Just for those who commented, thank you, here is the finished version until I decide if it's worth reshooting or not. Sorry, the original is gone.

I did some dodging and a little bit of burning along the roof, and I desaturated the hilights, which had that nasty cyan tint.

I like this one better, the contrast towards the bottom is tasty ^^

 

[unpopular]

mmmmm contrast.

 

[tevo]

mmmmm contrast.

:lmao: