Watching me but being watched

[The_Traveler]

 

[mmaria]

I would prefer this one more cropped or in the other hand much looser than that this

 

[StefanCo]

I would prefer this one more cropped or in the other hand much looser than that this

A closer crop would remove the lady on the right with the camera who kinda destroys the 'authentic' look of the image. The background on the right part hasn't got much interesting content so it wouldn't hurt to go for the closer crop.

 

[JerryLove]

I'll third that. The composition is really interesting from the far left and across about 60%, then it kinda breaks the mood. I wonder if a shallower DoF might be an improvement as well.

Very nice pic though. Thank you for sharing it.