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Sony A100, ISO 100, F8, 1/400, 100mm Sigma Bigma
 
Great subject and well exposed/processed, but two minor quibbles: (1) I keep looking at the two strips of lighter-colored vegetation in the upper left that lead out of the frame - perhaps crop to where they diverge? (2) the roof doesn't stand out that well from the background; lightening the background a bit might help.
 
Great subject and well exposed/processed, but two minor quibbles: (1) I keep looking at the two strips of lighter-colored vegetation in the upper left that lead out of the frame - perhaps crop to where they diverge? (2) the roof doesn't stand out that well from the background; lightening the background a bit might help.

I actually darkened the background to give it a more going back to nature look. LOL
 
Great subject and well exposed/processed, but two minor quibbles: (1) I keep looking at the two strips of lighter-colored vegetation in the upper left that lead out of the frame - perhaps crop to where they diverge? (2) the roof doesn't stand out that well from the background; lightening the background a bit might help.

I actually darkened the background to give it a more going back to nature look. LOL

That makes sense - it does have that look. Obviously I wasn't "getting the picture".
 
Nice composition. Just bothers me a bit that the roof blends into the background, very busy.
 
Great subject and well exposed/processed, but two minor quibbles: (1) I keep looking at the two strips of lighter-colored vegetation in the upper left that lead out of the frame - perhaps crop to where they diverge? (2) the roof doesn't stand out that well from the background; lightening the background a bit might help.

I actually darkened the background to give it a more going back to nature look. LOL

That makes sense - it does have that look. Obviously I wasn't "getting the picture".

It would be cool if you would make the tweaks you feel would make it better :thumbup:

Nice composition. Just bothers me a bit that the roof blends into the background, very busy.

Tweak it and see what you come up with

Thanks guys for looking and commenting
 
I think I would have used a tighter aperture to make the background that much sharper.
 
[converted to lab and fooled with the lightness then reverted and punched the curve if you're curious]

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Sometimes you can use a filter (an Orange would have been nice for this I think) but sometimes you just have to position yourself to get the light from the right direction if time won't help.
 
[converted to lab and fooled with the lightness then reverted and punched the curve if you're curious]

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Sometimes you can use a filter (an Orange would have been nice for this I think) but sometimes you just have to position yourself to get the light from the right direction if time won't help.

So what where you going for in this edit?
 

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