Window Sills

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Images deleted. See post below.

 

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As a result of feedback received on another forum, I re-edited the images from scratch.

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2a


2b (brown and white version )


2bII (another brown and white option)


I like the tone of brown better in the last one, but I think there's not enough separation between the shutter and the brick...

Looking for C&C, if possible.

 

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sorry, they don't bring me a message, no interesting points for me to look at first and i think that none of the colors actually fit... i think less saturation for #1 and it may have potential..

 

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sorry, they don't bring me a message, no interesting points for me to look at first and i think that none of the colors actually fit... i think less saturation for #1 and it may have potential..

This is the risk of trying abstract compositions; some work for some people, some don't... I'm certainly not trying to convey any particular messages –other than an invitation to lose yourself in an image for a moment.

Number 1 is actually desaturated a bit, but it might work better with even more desaturation.

I appreciate your honest feedback.