Yellow

[jaomul]

I liked the colour


Focus by jaomul, on Flickr

 

[RxForB3]

I like!

 

[Actinometro]

Very nice shot. I guess it would result much better if you cropped the back area. :thumbup:

 

[Frequency]

I fell in Love

 

[paigew]

I love it too! But I also agree about cropping the black/sky so its nothing but yellowness

 

[Joel_W]

Crop out the black, repost, and you've got one very strong composition.

 

[jaomul]

Thanks for the Critique and comments. Here it is as many of you suggested with the crop

 

[ccote321]

Great shot! Like the updated crop to make it truly Yellow

 

[Joel_W]

A huge improvement.

 

[shady195]

Love it! Thought a bit strainful on the eyes haha, if you could id try and maybe sharpen up the infocus objects so that there are more dominate in the photo and less strainful to look at.


I personally liked it with the black sky, if it was taken a bit lower so that the tops of the flowers were pertruding into that black area I think it would have made for an interesting photo.. Though don't let my comments take away from it, I do still think its wonderful

 

[GnipGnop]

I like it better with the black to provide some contrast. I would have also closed the aperture a bit to get a bit more depth of field so more plants are in focus.

The bokeh is very nice on this and not distracting at all. Nice and smooth. I think I would reshoot this so that one of the flowering stalks in focus extended into the black to act as a visual lead from the black to the yellow. All it would take is a lower angle.

Nice work.

 

[CheezyCheeto]

Much better with the crop :thumbup: