1st person

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Bear, Oct 4, 2007.

  1. Bear

    Bear New Member

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    I think this is the first person I've shot with the camera, outside of a gig or concert that is :)

    C&C welcome

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    he's scary. the look on his face could kill.
     
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    The wires are distracting and his face is too much in the shadows. Perhaps a tighter crop around him?

    I don't find him scary at all. :)
     
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    "must...... read....... paper...........TOO..........HARD"

    there is no focus, the mans face is completely swallowed by darkness, and as someone else said the background is far too distracting, particulary the wires and the rock thing smack in the middle.

    Nice idea though...
     

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