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  1. bikefreax

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    Great shots!!!
    #1, LOVE the starburst effect of the lights... LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!! Did I mention LOVE IT :)!
    #2, Nice peaceful and sereen. Would like to see a bit more color, make it POP!.. But nice never the less!
    #3, Not my favorite. The light post seems tilted counter-clockwise a bit to me.
    Guess 2 outta 3 aint bad! :)
     
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    Yea #2 is my fav also and I am awaiting spring to really get here to go back out to get the more colors. It's been a long winter here in Missouri.
    Noticed the lamp post being cockeyed but I thought it added to the shop but thanks for the thoughts.
     
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    #1 is pretty nice, but there's just enough brightness in the scene for me, but I still like it.

    #2, as mentioned, is just too dull. The scene itself is nice, and I'd love to see a similar composition with more color. Make sure to get some good colors in the spring.

    #3 has an absolutely gorgeous sky, but if you get past the sky, it's just a picture of a lightpost. It's important for shots showing how beautiful a sky is to also have some other interesting subject involved, and to me personally, a lightpost isn't that interesting, sorry. But yes, that sky is damn fine.
     
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    hey
    another Hughes in the house =D
     
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    I really like them
    I like how crisp #1 is it's a really cool picture however the more I looked at it, it almost looks like you took it through a window, did you?
     
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    Nope, I was on top of a parking garage.
     

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