atmsanchez
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These are from one of the photoshoots i have done lately.
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the pose in #1 is awful... baby looks great... dad looks awkward. Not a fan of Dad's profile view (don't think it does much for him, perhaps if his face was posed a bit differently) but what hurts him in this is that he loses me because of some of the shadows in his face... in that position i'd work out a different lighting setup to fill some shadows, it may slim up his neck a little bit too. his fingers are annoying the crap out of me, they should hold the baby's head instead of looking like something is sticky on baby and he doesn't want to put his fingers on her. I think this picture would look much better if he had a protective bond feel over his child... right now it just looks like he's either about to drop the baby and/or trying to figure out what the heck is on her nose .
The 2nd one... I hate selective coloring but regardless of that, this picture would be WONDERFUL if it didn't have that fake rose and pacifier in it (they are distracting, even if they were black and white with the rest of the picture)... in a picture like this, you don't need props and certainly no pacis... if it was just simplistic with arms and naked baby it would have been a gorgeous shot b/c the baby's pose is great and everything looks natural and peaceful... the rose and pacifier mess it up
just my opinion though... you've got a good eye and they are great photos composition wise, just a few quirks in them that keep it from being awesome. keep praciticing!