A Chinese School Girl

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  1. tsien

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    There is a ton of dust in your scan but overall I like the shot. Nice composition.
     
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    Quality, quaility, quality... I don't know is it JPG compression artifacts or too high ISO sensivity but there are many white dot (noise?) in the photo. Overexposured sky is disturbing me a little.:(

    But an idea is quite good;)
     
  4. Cuervo79

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    I find the over exposure takes lots of details out of the photo, and can not see enough detail in with the branch, if the school girl is the subject, I would of moved the branch to the left so it would not interfere with the girl. If you scaned the image, I find it that the hues are too red.
    If you wanted to show the branch and the girl, I would of used some fill flash for the branch so it would stand out of the dark tree in the background.
     
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    too much dust, sky is distracting, branches of tree bother me a little....just my opinion. otherwise i really like the idea you're going after; composition and setting are very good.
     

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