a day in the park

Discussion in 'The Professional Gallery' started by Christina, Apr 12, 2008.

  1. Christina

    Christina TPF Noob!

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    any C&C is welcome.
    dont be afraid about hurting my feelings.
    Im here to learn.


    Im sorry if they show up huge. they are fairly large on my screen. but small on others :(

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  2. Lyncca

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    Can you post them a bit larger? We usually do 800 pixels on the long side.

    They look like cute photos :)
     
  3. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Indeed, they are being presented in too small a version for anyone to really be able to critique anything...
     
  4. Christina

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    i reloaded them, so hopefully this works better :)
     
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    very cute,

    especially the first one. Priceless
     
  6. Christina

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    Thank you,

    :)

    any one else?
     
  7. RowmyF

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    I think you got some adorable shots but I can't focus on the capture because:

    1. The photos are out of focus. Your subjects are soft.
    2. The B&W conversions are too gray and flat. Can we see the originals?

    I also think the last shot needs a tighter crop and would benefit from some vignetting...
     
  8. Goran Katic

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    the last is the best...
     
  9. Christina

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    i agree. i had to print that one out, i was very fond of it.




    i will have to post originals when i get back to my (other) computer :)
     

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