A Lemon Standing Out

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  1. mcbphoto

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    oh yes, forgot, it's the critique forum.

    Nice idea with the bright fruit in a bleak backround, but it's too far out of the frame to work IMHO, it needs to be brought into the frame more.
     
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    Like the idea too, but the right hand side of your lemon looks a bit overexposed and bleached out to me.
     

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