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  1. Allsmiles7282

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    I'm not sure if I like this or not...I feel like there is something else that could be done to make it better...any ideas?
     
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    It looks a little off balance, using the pathway as a central feature leading you to the vdub which is not quite central to it, and the building in the background is not balanced with the little pyramid thingies there and the curve from the wide angle makes the lines look odd

    The car is pretty symmetrical, but the rest isn't.

    Pretty tight parking there though!
     
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    It seems to slope downhill a bit, and also the white car on the right is blown out pretty bad...like the idea behind this shot though :)
     
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    i think perhaps a different angle, maybe a little lower down showing more of the pathway and less of the building,
     
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    I'd make the yellow punch more, perhaps some saturation. Punch buggy yellow! No punch backs.
     

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