A portrait this time

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  1. sparc872

    sparc872 TPF Noob!

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    The dog looks like its growing out of her back. TV...Nice candid moment but lots of distractions.
     
  3. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    If she likes posing for you, try again.
    Get on her level. Try not to be taller than herself. Avoid distractions in the background.
    Lighting is nice in this one, though. (On her face, that is).
     
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    Alison Swiss Army Friend Supporting Member

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    I second what LaPhoto said, if she's willing try a reshoot. This is a nice natural moment but the dog and TV definately take away from the photo.
     
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    I'm with LaFoto and Alison... kill the dog, the telly and the bookshelf. I'd got for a re-shoot (if possible) in a different spot paying a lot more attention to removing clutter in the background. (Sorry - but gotta be honest.)
     

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