Abstract? comments please.

[Radical]

 

[Mully]

Sorry it does not work for me

 

[KenC]

Not bad. There's some good texture and pattern there, but something seems to be off for me. It could be the color - it might be more appealing as closer to a straight black and white, maybe with a slight tint.

 

[mishele]

You have something here but it's not quite finished. Here is a really quick edit. It gives you an idea of what is in this shot that you can pull out...