Adi - portrait

[kfirg]

hi people!

Here is a picture from my last photographs - The concept was Cleopatra

the bad thing is that the right shoulder is not perfect - sorry for that!

kfir.

 

[jswill]

Very Nice!

 

[sscarmack]

The eyes are a tad too dark for my taste. But a really nicely styled portrait! Well done.

 

[tirediron]

^^Yep!^^ If you could brighten up the eyes a smidge and pull some detail from the hair this would be stand-out.

 

[kfirg]

thank you guys!

here is the new one

 

[JohnnyWrench]

Beautiful! Shame about clipping her shoulder off. I'd clean up the skin around her finger nails a bit. I know it's nit picky, but I noticed it immediately.

 

[mmaria]

her left shoulder looks a bit weird, try to warp it

 

[kfirg]

i tried to fix this...

check this out

 

[Braineack]

hate the smoothing.

 

[kfirg]

without

 

[mcap1972]

Overall great. The only thing that bothers me is the shape of the catchlights.