All washed up (one photo)

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  1. er111a

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    I like photo, the horizon isnt level and the yellow look like someone pee'd on the picture i think it would have been nicer just black and white. but i do like the picture :D
     
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    +1

    The horizon's even more because it's close to the edge of the picture. But yeah, without the yellow, it'd be really great!
     
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    thank you for the thoughts :)
     
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    I personally like the 2nd edit a lot more, but horizon is still a off
    overall the picture is appealing to me good job !
     
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    really like the picture, but agree with everyone else about the horizon.
     
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    I do like the 1st picture a little better. Reminds me as if this is an old picture from the 60s that got lost and was damp on the side hence the yellow corners
     
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    I like the black and white better :)
     
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    thank you :) I will fix the horizon everyone :)
     
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    thoughts from bigger named people on this site?
     
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    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    More of the same.

    I want to know, from those who like this photo, why? Describe what appeals to you.

    The first one looks like it was peed on.
    What feeling were you hoping this to invoke?
    Have you straightened that horizon yet?
    Basic editing stuff you miss every time. :er:
     

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