Am I starting to get it?

Lyncca · May 29, 2008

I have been working really hard on composition, posing, lighting, flash, no flash, shadows, white balance, exposure, egad! It's freaking hard isn't it?

This my 4th "studio" shoot. I took the pictures last night and fell in love with these little girls. I can't wait to process the rest of them, but I wanted to see if yall thought I am doing better and what else to watch for in the future.

First shoot:
http://www.lyncca.smugmug.com/gallery/4595103_GuBF5#271108175_HpAPp
(with a TON of post processing)

Fourth shoot:

Big Mike · May 29, 2008

Looks really good to me. Well done.

GeorgiaOwl · May 29, 2008

I love both shots! Nice lighting, esp the second shot. Those two are gonna break some hearts in 10 years.

kmp1191 · May 29, 2008

I know I'm a noob here, but I like them! :thumbup:

Shibby! · May 29, 2008

You work is really paying off.

Nice work.

Lyncca · May 29, 2008

Thanks everyone! I'm so happy y'all like them! This was my first time to use my flash off of my camera. Fun stuff!

I'm getting more comfortable instructing and noticing little things like resting their head too heavy on their hands, blocking eachothers faces, etc.

These kids are definitely going to be heartbreakers. They are absolutely hilarious, I have a ton of out-takes that I think are going to be just as cute as the "posed" shots.

I can't wait until their Mom sees them!

JimmyJaceyMom · May 29, 2008

The first one is perfect, just adorable! The second is very nice as well but in my opinion the lighting seems a tad harsh and maybe the WB off a bit. But you're doing excellent!

JimmyO · May 29, 2008

Very nice
Love the first one!

Lacey Anne · May 29, 2008

I think they're both fantastic. Your work is showing. Nicely done.

Lyncca · May 30, 2008

JimmyJaceyMom said:
The first one is perfect, just adorable! The second is very nice as well but in my opinion the lighting seems a tad harsh and maybe the WB off a bit. But you're doing excellent!

Hmm, yea, I think you are right. It looks a little yellowish. I will rework the RAW.

I showed their Mom the pics last night and she was absolutely thrilled. Here are some more.... (I didn't completely post-process all of them until she makes her pics)...

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7. A bit of a shadow behind Carrie, but beautiful expressions. I will probably finish the postwork on this one to brighten eyes, etc.

Deadeye008 · May 30, 2008

:thumbup: Very Nice!

visualpoetry · Jun 12, 2008

I love the toe shot! Very creative!

ClarkKent · Jun 13, 2008

Very nice indeed.

bigalbest · Jun 13, 2008

These photos look over processed to me and that's usually when you start running into color and printing problems. Also I think when you're a beginner you shouldn't put large logos all over your work, and actually starting your business before you have any experience is hurting photography as a whole. Your posing, composition and other elements show that you have a great eye but you clearly need more training before you can call yourself a professional. Remember that processed photos look processed even to the customers who you think don't know the difference. Try taking some college courses or working for a studio to gain all the skills you need (you will learn a lot faster than on your own).

Cubase · Jun 20, 2008

Lyncca, I LOVE your photos. Keep up the great work and don't listen to comments like the one above mine. I don't know who this guy thinks he is... :lol: