another color/b&w

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  1. JonMikal

    JonMikal TPF Noob!

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    still playing with this technique. whatcha think?

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    Not bad, any reason you cropped out the star of your photo?

    That said, try a) eliminating the yellow b) eliminating everything save the 4 'chime bars' or what have you.
     
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    JonMikal TPF Noob!

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    good idea, i'll try that. thanks!
     
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    I like this shot and the color that you added - but the cutting off of the baby head just doesnt seem right :lol:
     
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    I don't know why I didn't include the childs head. My focus was the action and I guess without the head, this could be any child.
     
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    I actually kinda like the idea of cropping the child's head out. Although ruining the composition, it makes the picture look more... err unstandard. Ive seen millions of pics of kids playing with toys, it really is becoming a clich?(to me anyways).
     
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    Well, I like the composition as is. I do like Jadin's idea of just leaving the color in the chime bars.
     
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    Meeehhh. It o...k.. It's just photo to practice handcoloring on
     

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