Baby Brother [HS Senior]

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  1. kric2schaam626

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    Hey I'm doing my brother's senior pictures. Just wanted to put a few out there for some C&C. Any would be appreciated. Thanks!

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    f8 1/250s 52mm
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    f5.3 1/400s 62mm
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    f5.6 1/400s 75mm
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    kric2schaam626 TPF Noob!

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    Anyone? Are they that bad? :confused:
     
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    They look nice. #1 and #3 especially. Love the B/W of #1 and the composition. Nice job.
     
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    honestly I think you missed the focus on all three, on the second and third his shirt is in perfect focus down at his stomach.

    Jerry
     
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    How would you have posed him differently?
     
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    sorry, i should have stated this differently. his face is not in focus in those shots.

    Jerry
     
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    there a little to soft. sharpen them up some.
     
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    I agree with the softness issue, but overall, nicely done.
     
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    Thanks for the feedback!! We still have to shoot more yet :)
     

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