Baby Brother [HS Senior]

[kric2schaam626]

Hey I'm doing my brother's senior pictures. Just wanted to put a few out there for some C&C. Any would be appreciated. Thanks!

1. f8 1/250s 52mm

2. f5.3 1/400s 62mm

3.f5.6 1/400s 75mm

 

[kric2schaam626]

Anyone? Are they that bad?

 

[TriniPhototakeoutta]

They look nice. #1 and #3 especially. Love the B/W of #1 and the composition. Nice job.

 

[smn_xps]

honestly I think you missed the focus on all three, on the second and third his shirt is in perfect focus down at his stomach.

Jerry

 

[kric2schaam626]

honestly I think you missed the focus on all three, on the second and third his shirt is in perfect focus down at his stomach.

Jerry

How would you have posed him differently?

 

[smn_xps]

sorry, i should have stated this differently. his face is not in focus in those shots.

Jerry

 

[HeY iTs ScOTtY]

sorry, i should have stated this differently. his face is not in focus in those shots.

Jerry

there a little to soft. sharpen them up some.

 

[emptypockets]

I agree with the softness issue, but overall, nicely done.

 

[kric2schaam626]

Thanks for the feedback!! We still have to shoot more yet