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  1. rls2002

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    this picture reminds me of the movie north by northwest for sum reason. :)
     
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    nice composition, a little bit light though... i'd throw it into PS and burn it up a little bit.... maybe give it a little contrast as well... .... that sky is just a little bright

    nice shot though
     
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    I like it too. I think there's some additional hidden potential too. I'd also up the contrast and probably crop to emphasize the lines more.
     
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    I am really bad at photoshop but I gave it a little try.... If you want me to take it down let me know and I will..
     
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    The forum rule is to ask first unless their profile says it's ok to edit.
     
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    Go for it.....
     
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    I like that picture. Where was that taken at?

    - Nikon L.
     
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    Thats a pretty nice shot, did you take it at the look out spot everyone stops at? If so you did a nice job of getting an unobstructed view. Also I would up the contrast.

    That is half dome in Yosemite National Park.
     
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    Here it is again... Let me know what you think... Once again I am really really bad with photoshop

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    Better?

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    Its still a little too light for my liking... But it is what you like in a picture not what other people like. It is still a great shot though dont get me wrong on that.
     

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