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    Josh66 Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    It looks a little strange, only seeing half of his head...

    I would crop (or clone) out the edge of the door on the left too.
     
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    B.T.P TPF Noob!

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    Yeah I noticed the edge of the door after I uploaded it to flickr :meh: And I was to lazy to go back and fix it and re-upload it lol.
     
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    Love it.
     
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    Has the makings of a nice image, I would like to have seen less of his face, and the doorknob in its entirety to offset the left side of the picture and to give a nice graphic comp.
     
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    Laziness = Bad pictures. Hard work = great pictures.
     
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    oh wow! I really love this image, a nice peice of art to me. I hope you don't mind, but I re-touched this image, imo it looks better in square format and slight crop (as Josh said :) ).

    You could also do a few more shots similar to this one, like a family or something and place all these images together to create a story or theme, would be awesome :D

    [​IMG]
     
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    I wouldn't crop out the head...it looks like an ad for apparel now. I would keep half of his face in there..quite abstract. I love the door handle!
     

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