C&C 6 pics from a noob

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  1. Hock

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    Please let me know what you think. I won't mind harsh C&C.
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  2. DannyB

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    I like 5 the best but the landscape in #3 has alot of potential I think.
     
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    In different ways, they all have potential, but I don't think you've quite captured it in any of them. For example, in the setting for the first two, I wouldn't bother trying to take a shot of a chair and a table, instead I'd get in close on the table and get some nice shapes and tones with the light shining on it.
     
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    not to sure why you posted 3, you cant really see anything, other than the dust on yor lens.
     
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    I like 4,maybe you could play with it a bit to see if sharpening/lightning helps to bring it out more ?
     
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    The first three are pretty dark to me...it could be the computer I'm on right now- work computer that's been beaten up pretty badly, so I'll check again when I get home. 5 and 6 are pretty cool, although the bridge in 6 seems to be tilted a little. Keep it up!
     
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    There is no dust on that lens.

    Agree about the bay bridge landscape. If you can, go back and play with it some more.
     
  8. Hock

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    I was going for the landscape. It actually is not dust but stars. Taken at high ISO with long exposure, probably not 100% in focus as well. It was around 2:00 AM up in the mountains. I wasn't too confident in that picture, guess it had a good reason... Thanks for the C&C
     
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