C&C please: Chillaxing at school

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  1. bnz506

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    What do you think?

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    i don't think anythink! i like it very much!!!!!!


    Fede
     
  3. C.Lloyd

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    Interesting perspective, blah content. Like the B&W aspect.
     
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    I'm with Mr. Lloyd. Or is it Ms?
     
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    Would it change anything if I told you this shot was a shot at my school for a school theme gallery to come?

    I kind of felt the bleh also but I didnt want to influence minds lol.
     
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    It's a little crooked and the subject is boring as stated above.
     
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    The tiles are crooked - not sure how one would effectively work around that.
     
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    It's not just the tiles that are crooked. Look at the seats, the walls, and the smaller staircase in the back.

    It seems a bit dark, and it could use a little contrast boost.

    Also, I'd crop out the seats in the top left corner, to make it look like the hallway keeps going. And maybe take a bit off the top.
     
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    I'm going to have to disagree with the contrast boost. Blacks are blacks already. It may come out too high-contrast.
     
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    You're probably right. Bringing up the brightness would also blow out the floor. The people in the bottom left corner are definitely too dark though. I suppose you could dodge them.
     
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    It's Mr., except that makes me sound old. :confused:
     

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