Carmel

Discussion in 'The Professional Gallery' started by anthwinter, Apr 26, 2007.

  1. anthwinter

    anthwinter TPF Noob!

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    needs more contrast...its very flat and dull looking....sorry...
     
  3. anthwinter

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    Ok heres one with a bit more contrast and brightness taken down a tad

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    There is a harsh shadow behind her shoulders and the face is too bright. You need softer lighting. Also, have her stand further away from the wall/background, lock the focus on those beautiful eyes and see what you get the second time.
     
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    I agree with everything njman said..The harsh shadow is caused by the flash on the camera which makes the deer in the headlight look. I took a stab at it and toned it down a little and try to get the underexposed parts looking better. I also tried to take out the shadow behind the wall. This is just a quick edit but I hope it helps you get the point for the next time you shoot it. Oh and also for the next time you shoot it have her move her finger..


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    thanks for the comments people ill note them for next time, totaly understand about the shadow and the finger!
     
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    haha alright man.. well sorry we've been chopping it up but its a great shot nonetheless those are just a few minor pointers
     
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    Nice edit attempt zion. I didnt even notice the finger until you said something. ;) I was so drawn in by those eyes!!

    anthwinter, you will get there. Keep studying about light and try to bounce and/or diffuse it and experiment with different setups. You have a good model to work with. Hope to see some more of your posts. :)
     

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