city scape cc please

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    looks kind of like a snapshot to me. And the red pole on the right is a bit distracting
     
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    its not really a city scape.. its more of a building shot... city scapes generally have like the "downtown" area lots of buildings, that sort of thing.. and yes, the red pole on the right is very distracting
     
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    The crooked horizon kind of bugs me.
     
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    This is a shot of the city of Chicago. This is what I think of when you say city scape. Not sure what you are going for in the picture posted. Sorry.

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    Posted 3 months ago or not, I still do not understand the idea here. It's not a cityscape. I would like to provide constructive criticism but in what fashion? What were you going for in this photo. That will alter my comments.

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    i like the bridge back there---i may be wrong but i think you were going for that to be the main subject.? i just dont think you shot this in the right spot. maybe if you live near you could go back and get a closer shot without all the houses in front. make the bridge the subject and not the background
     
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    the whole photo is a mess
     

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