Cleone @ Edward Garden

Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Himalayan, Jul 1, 2004.

  1. Himalayan

    Himalayan TPF Noob!

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    Your suggestions/comments are welcome :D

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  2. canonrebel

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    In #1 the crop is uninspiring. The Model is lovely and her expression is sensuous and pleasant. I think it needs creative correction in order to be a portrait.

    In #2 the pose is nice, but the camera angle that is too low is probably not displaying the model at her best.

    In #3 the pose doesn't work. It creates tension with the tree. The model seems to be resisting the tree. I would like to see a closely cropped bust (head and shoulders) of this one. I think it would soar.
     
  3. StvShoop

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    where is everyone getting the hot asian models?

    i'd like to hire one :oops: :oops: :oops:
     

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