Coteaux Du Languedoc

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  1. MyNameIsChris

    MyNameIsChris TPF Noob!

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    Wine.

    My first shot at commercial-looking photography. PLEASE give me constructive criticism, I know it needs work but I can't put my finger on what it is. Help me out!

    Soft box to right
    Translucent umbrella to left
    430ex bounced off ceiling

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    Kind of plain. Glad you stuck with the white background though.
     
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    Yeah, I think I should have poured some into a wine glass and put it next to it, or something like that.
     
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    Anyone else? Any C&C is very appreciated.
     
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    Looks like the softbox could be pushed upstage to move that harsh highlight back. A rim / fill from the back right might help fill out the darker edges of the bottle - but I'm a more a virtual lighting guy... so I'm just guessing.

    Is there a green cast in the label or is the label actually light green? If it is white I would work to preserve it.

    -Shea
     

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