Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Holy Ghosted, May 28, 2007.
ok guys let me know if this is any better started with a new shot
the poles are too distracting
I have to agree with Silver. And I dunno if it's the lighting, the PP, or if those actually are the colors, but the tone range of the blues looks a bit limited.
Just an idea: try tilting the camera virtically so we see the whole statue and the top of the tower without see the poles? Would that work?
You'd never be able to capture the shot without the poles unless you moved forward, and shot the building wide-angle on a LF camera.
Yes if you wanted the whole building you would have trouble... maybe from an angle?
I'd like to see the bottom of the building too. Seems like it was a tough composition but I think another angle might've worked better.
What about this: Crop + balance changes since you cant get the front without the poles?
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