court house round 2

[Holy Ghosted]

ok guys let me know if this is any better started with a new shot

 

[silver163]

the poles are too distracting

 

[Alpha]

I have to agree with Silver. And I dunno if it's the lighting, the PP, or if those actually are the colors, but the tone range of the blues looks a bit limited.

 

[D40]

Just an idea: try tilting the camera virtically so we see the whole statue and the top of the tower without see the poles? Would that work?

 

[Alpha]

You'd never be able to capture the shot without the poles unless you moved forward, and shot the building wide-angle on a LF camera.

 

[D40]

Yes if you wanted the whole building you would have trouble... maybe from an angle?

 

[rmh159]

I'd like to see the bottom of the building too. Seems like it was a tough composition but I think another angle might've worked better.

 

[D40]

What about this: Crop + balance changes since you cant get the front without the poles?