court house round 2

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  1. Holy Ghosted

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    ok guys let me know if this is any better started with a new shot

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    the poles are too distracting
     
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    I have to agree with Silver. And I dunno if it's the lighting, the PP, or if those actually are the colors, but the tone range of the blues looks a bit limited.
     
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    Just an idea: try tilting the camera virtically so we see the whole statue and the top of the tower without see the poles? Would that work?
     
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    You'd never be able to capture the shot without the poles unless you moved forward, and shot the building wide-angle on a LF camera.
     
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    Yes if you wanted the whole building you would have trouble... maybe from an angle?
     
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    I'd like to see the bottom of the building too. Seems like it was a tough composition but I think another angle might've worked better.
     
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    What about this: Crop + balance changes since you cant get the front without the poles?

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