Critique my picture please!!

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  1. christinagbee31

    christinagbee31 TPF Noob!

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    I am new here and I really want some constructive criticism on my photos because I want to learn. Here is a recent picture I took....

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    What are your thoughts?

    Thanks :wink:
     
  2. saltface

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    First, welcome to the forum.
    Hmmm...
    The shot is well composed but there's nothing about it that really grabs the attention.
    I do like the seed pods blowing away on the far right. Mebbe make it more of the focus?
     
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    It's over exposed. The blown whites kind of kill the picture and you loose a lot of detail.
     
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    Yea, I agree.

    I like the overall picture, I think a smaller aperture would have been better to capture more of the fluff.
     
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    I think if the face of the person holding the dandelion were in the shot, I'd like it more. Not in focus, just behind the flower or to one side.
     
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    Should be sharper. Other then that, I like it!
     

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